Tuesday, December 6

Tuesday poem blogging

For Amber, my contribution to Tolstoy Tuesday:

Act I

This life, a dinner theatre for dead relatives,
deserves better lighting and a script with clean line breaks,
a protagonist who craves sex and solitude in equal doses:
who won't speak in strained metaphors
when soliloquizing
on the commute home from work.

2 Comments:

Blogger phallicpen said...

Gorgeous. You've always been amazing at capturing a concentration in ten lines or less.

Let's keep doing this. It's enjoyable.

Tue Dec 06, 11:59:00 PM  
Blogger theogeo said...

Thanks! I definitely think we should keep doing this.

Thu Dec 08, 01:22:00 AM  

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